Continued work on watercolor clouds

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As I continue working on this same piece, watercolor clouds, with a little feedback from fellow artists, I have made a few changes.  My shadows within the clouds have become gray instead of blue, creating a much better shadow effect. I have tried to make the lines more random and not so uniformly scalloped.  I have also added a few more secondary shadow levels. It has really improved the realism, but it still comes across as too planned out with the  three even breaks in the clouds, so I will need to start a fresh painting instead of continuing to rework this one.

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